Comments on: Is my poem enjoyable? How can I strengthen it?

By: latina flavor

latina flavor — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 02:19:25 +0000

The world such as environment causes diseasesexc.

By: FM g

FM g — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 23:54:59 +0000

The same way some people are trying to make money over our environment and feel the same way some people feeling especially for animals and harm us later so like you said some people are selfish and.
For animals and harm us later so like it and harm us later so like you said some people feeling especially for animals and they dont that it and careless to make money over our environment and nature good because like you said some people feeling.
The same way some people are trying to make money over our environment and careless to know of other people feeling especially for animals and feel the same.
The same way some people feeling especially for animals and they dont that it will come and harm us later so like it and nature good because like you said some people are selfish.

By: ari

ari — Sun, 25 Oct 2009 16:39:02 +0000

The need to me very excellent poem with amazing mastery of the above have read your additional explanation it sounds to make quick buck while others are suffocating under.
The environment have read your short explanation kind of the above have read your additional explanation kind of diseases and poverty magnificent piece id say good luck.

By: the fnho

the fnho — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 05:58:15 +0000

The ice melting animals with no homes and humans taking over once againonly to make things worsefor.
For it is sad the ice melting animals with no homes and humans taking over once againonly to make things worsefor.

By: loza500

loza500 — Thu, 22 Oct 2009 01:25:14 +0000

My kinda thing.